A few years ago, I got chatting on the internet with P from Scotland. We wrote an erotic story by exchanging e-mails.
I WROTE
I am boarding a train. It's going to be quite a long journey, about 2 hours. I'm on my way to a training course and we have been told to dress casually. For a bit of fun, I have decided to go 'commando'. My trousers are linen and very soft, so they tend to show the outline of what’s inside!It's going to be a long journey so I walk through the train looking for someone to sit with. I see a woman (you) and the first thing I notice is your clear blue eyes. As I get nearer, I see that you are wearing a split skirt that is revealing some of your thigh. This is a good place to sit!You are sitting next to the window, and you indicate that the seat next to you is available. I reach up and put my briefcase on the luggage rack above your head. I'm not sure, but I think I catch you looking at the front of my trousers. As I sit down, you cross your legs towards me, revealing even more thigh.
I open up a newspaper and hold it with both hands. My right hand is very near (but carefully not touching) your leg. We chat about the items of news in the paper, and I make you laugh a few times - always a good sign.You make comment about a photograph in the paper. You reach across and touch the photo with your finger. The paper is resting on my lap. Is it a coincidence that the photo happens to be directly above my partial erection? I wonder if you are able to feel anything through the paper and the linen?
SHE WROTE
We have stopped at yet another station I wonder if there will be anyone interesting getting on as the last lot of passengers were rather dull and boring a lot of business men on their way to important meetings therefore too busy looking at their paperwork to notice me!I have moved over to a vacant seat beside a window I as watch the next lot of passenger get on there a few interesting characters that get my attention most of them walk on to seats further on up the train but one man slowly walks up the aisle looking as he goes just he approaches my section I smile at him he is of average height, med build with a nice smile.He is very well dressed, you can see he takes time in the choosing of his clothes and his appearance I notice he is very casual but smart dressed wearing what looks to be like linen trousers (very smart). He asks if the seat next to me is taken, I smile and say no it’s free. He reaches up to put his bag in the luggage rack above our heads. He's quite close to me. Can’t help but notice .......... surely I’m wrong but I can make out the outline of him through his trousers. (My mind has some nice thoughts running through it).
I’m glad I took a little bit of effort dressing this morning a skirt with a side split not too much but shows a bit of thigh as well as a blouse. He sits down next to me and takes out his paper making the odd comment about the weather and things in the paper. I make myself more comfortable. .............Crossing my legs I notice him looking out of the corner of his eye..... I may have flashed him a bit of thigh there ..........A small smile grows on his face I think this is going to be a very enjoyable journey today!!!
I WROTEWe continue talking and laughing. I am still holding the edge of the newspaper in my right hand. The train jerks as we go over a bumpy bit of track, and my hand rests against your bare thigh. We briefly glance at each other and both smile. I take that as a sign that I can leave my hand where it is.After a few minutes I suggest that we take a walk to the buffet car and buy a coffee. You agree, and we start to walk through the train. When we arrive at the buffet it is very busy and we have to join quite a long queue. While we talk, we stand facing each other and we are very close because it is so crowded. Once again the train lurches and you fall towards me. I take firm hold of you and the full length of our bodies touch. Rather than pulling away, I continue to hold your body against me. I can feel your breasts against my chest.... I whisper in your ear "This is very enjoyable". The smell of your perfume is getting me quite aroused. I am thinking about my next move...........
SHE WROTE
I am feeling very comfortable talking and sharing the odd joke with him. I go to point out something in the paper when I accidentally push down on the paper which was resting on his lap ....... and I'm sure I could feel a slight erection ..........I look at him to see if he's shocked that I touched him.He looks at me and smiles. Today the journey is very bumpy. The train is making us bump together every now and then which we laugh about. Its during one of these moments that my skirt that has risen up a bit exposing a bit more thigh allowing your hand to touch my thigh. ...........A warm feeling flows through my body as we both glance at each other. You leave your hand where it is resting.
It’s during this quiet moment that you ask me if I want to go for a coffee. I agree it’s a good idea as I need to stretch my legs. As we stroll through the other carriages to the buffet car we find that there is a long queue. As we take our position in it I turn to face you so that we can still chat. It's then that the train lurches forward and throws me forward.I'm glad that you catch me. Our bodies touch each other when you catch me.Holding me safe your mouth is close to my ear when you whisper that you find this very enjoyable I whisper back that I do also. I can hear you inhaling my perfume. After a few more lurches of the train we almost look embarrassed at each other.... Having realised that we might have gotten carried away and have we not realised that we were not alone.We laugh about what has happened. As we wait for our coffee you insist on paying .............
I WROTE
I pay for the coffee, and since the train is so bumpy I suggest that it might not be a good idea to carry hot drinks through the train. We move away from the serving area, and luckily there are two high stools at the very end of the bar.As you raise yourself onto the high stool your skirt rides up and, together with the split, I am able to see a lot of your thigh. At one point I even glimpse your white knickers.Getting onto my high stool stretches the material at the front of my trousers, making the outline of my growing excitement quite visible.
Luckily, the buffet is almost empty now.We are very close to each other. I lean towards you, and I whisper, "Can I kiss you?” I await your reply...........
SHE WROTEWe have moved over to two seats by the bar having decided that it was too risky to ourselves and others to try and carry back the coffee. So we move over to two seats by the bar. They are very high so with extreme difficulty I climb up which is difficult without my skirt riding up.
I notice that you can’t stop looking as you help me. Then it’s your turn I notice that the material of your trousers has grown taut exposing a slight swelling. I look appreciatively at it thinking.... I wonder what it would look like in the flesh….. And how it feels.
As we sit drinking our coffee he leans forward and whispers so that no one will hear.“ Can I kiss you"?
I look at him and smile. Then I look around....... the carriage has been slowly emptying of people, so I lean forward putting my hand on his thigh to steady myself.I tenderly kiss him ever so softly on his lips, which feel soft. My tongue sliding to his lips which are slightly parted and just flicks inside.
Think that this has taken him by surprise (I hope I haven’t been too forward).I move my hand up his thigh can feel the smooth material under my hand as I caress his leg.Can feel something swelling as I move my hand up. Giving him a gentle squeeze.My other hand has snaked around his neck pulling him closer as our tongues flick against each other mmmmm.
At the end of our kiss we both look into each other eyes knowing we both enjoyed what happened. I look around wondering if anyone has noticed what has happened but the carriage is just about empty and I think to others, we look as though we are a couple.
I WROTE
When I ask if I can kiss you, you lean towards me and I notice that you have large but lovely shaped breasts. As you lean your blouse falls forward and I get a glimpse of your lacy white bra. Seems that you are wearing matching lacy underwear. I like a woman that cares about her underwear, and lacy is sexy!Our first kiss is very tender, and I slightly part my lips. You sense my interest and you slide your tongue between my lips. I move my tongue to meet yours and our tongues flick. I am getting more aroused!To maintain your balance, you have rested your hand on my thigh. As we kiss I can feel your hand moving along my thigh. I know that I am quite hard and large, and I wonder how far your hand will travel.... That idea is getting me even more aroused!!Our kisses become more passionate. Our mouths are moving against each other's and our tongues are playing and searching. I feel your fingers as they just touch my hardness, and then you squeeze me. (I am thinking that you know what you want!)Your other hand moves around my neck, and I hold your body with my thumbs gently pressing the underside of your breasts.Eventually, we look at each other. It is obvious that we both enjoyed that very much and that we are both getting turned on.I touch your mouth and run my finger along your lips. You look me directly in the eye and start to suck my finger into your mouth. You do it very very slowly, and I can feel your tongue licking my finger as it enters your mouth. We both know what it means!!! The buffet car is empty now and the barman cannot see us.... So I place my hand on your thighs, just above your knees. Still looking into my eyes, you part your legs just enough to allow my hand to move along your inner thigh....
Your skin is so soft and smooth.... I dare not go too far.... You lift one foot onto a higher rail of the stool so that one knee is higher than the other.
That gives me a view right up to your knickers. I'm not sure, but it looks as if you might have a damp patch.......
SHE WROTE
As our kissing becomes more intense I can feel not only myself getting aroused but he is too.We part for a few minuets and you run a finger along my lips which I proceed to draw into my mouth to suck.My tongue sliding up and down it as I suck.
You have placed a hand on my thigh just letting it climb a bit feels so soft on my skin.
You only go so high then you stop.I wonder why and if you will start again I hope you do ............To let you know it’s what I want I part my legs a little as well as lifting my leg slightly. I know you can see the top of my thigh and I hope he can also see something else. Because I know it will be evident.Because I can feel that I am moist and have been almost since he stood before me.I know that he has looked at my breasts when I leaned forward and I think he will have seen my swollen nipples.
I know that he is very aroused too. Because I have felt it
I take a finger and run it up and down his length stopping at the tip circling it. I know he likes that as he draws a deep breath mmmmmm. I like it too.Feels so firm mmmmmmmmm
The carriage is empty now apart from the bar man and I'm sure that he can’t see us. I open my blouse by 2 buttons then take his hand and let it slide in my open blouse just so that he can feel my growing nipple.
He looks at me knowing that we both want this. As I stroke him his trousers bulging now hmmmmmmm so hard.
I WROTE
As my hand moves along your inner thigh, I see you put your hand at the top of my leg... You start running your finger along my length. My member moves in response to your touch. I see your eyes widen when that happens! Then you start to circle my tip. The sensation is amazing. I can feel everything because my linen trousers are very thin and I am not wearing pants. And that means that my shape is very visible.I am totally amazed when you undo two buttons of your blouse and slip my hand inside. I caress your breasts and I can feel that both your nipples are hard. In fact I can see their shape pushing through the lacy material of your bra.Checking that nobody is looking, I move my fingers to the top of your inner thigh and I stroke up and down over the material of your knickers. I am really pleased to discover that the material is damp..... It's great to discover how much I have turned you on!I feel you stroking me again.I lean forward and whisper, "I want to be inside you". You smile and whisper, "I want it as well, but how can we?”I stand up, and take you by the hand. I say, "follow me"......
SHE WROTE
I am feeling so good right now. He has just been caressing my nipples a fact that I found highly erotic and I know he did. He was very surprised when I undid my buttons and placed his hand there.Think it pleased him to find them aroused.He has moved his hand on up my thigh just as I had wanted slow and precise till he’s at the top where he gently stokes the outside up and down touching the contours of my mound pushing the material which is already damp into the centre of my lips which is making it wetter.
He has a smile on his face which I take means he’s pleased that I am aroused by what is happening. I have started stroking him again he is so hard I can not only feel it, I can see it as well as it is straining against his trousers.He leans forward and whispers "I want to be in you". I look at him and smile. "I want it too" but it’s not possible "is it "????He looks at me and smiles, then he takes me by the hand saying "follow me".
I look at him thinking yes I want him too. We start our way back up the carriages looking for somewhere quiet.
I WROTE
Holding hands, we quickly walk out of the buffet. We want each other so urgently and we are desperate to find a private place.Quite soon we see the toilet. I say, "I know it's not perfect but our options are limited!” Without even replying, you open the door and pull me in behind you. Luckily, it is very clean and tidy. Immediately we hold each other and kiss passionately. Our hands start moving and it seems only a few moments later that your blouse is completely open! Your hard nipples are pushing through your lacy bra. I gently use my teeth to nibble them through the material. I hear you moan.... It seems you find that very erotic.I reach behind you to unzip your skirt and it falls away. Now you are just in your bra and knickers.... I really like what I see. I find your body highly attractive and your skin is so smooth. It must be obvious to you that I am almost bursting to get out of my trousers...........
SHE WROTEHe has taken me by the hand and is leading me up the carriages looking for that quiet place. We come to a toilet he says, "it’s not great but our options are limited".
I open the door and pull him inside. Thankfully it’s clean.
Once inside we start kissing our hands exploring each other. Before I know it my blouse is open and my nipples are poking through my lacy bra.
You notice this and proceed to suckle on them. I am finding this so erotic as I stand there that I'm doing a lot of moaning and groaning.
We go back to kissing and our tongues searching out each other’s mouths.
Your hands slide round my waist and undo my zipper my skirt falls to the floor. There I am standing before you in only my bra and knickers. I catch you giving me the once over. I can tell you’re happy with what you see.
I know you’re overcome with excitement as I can feel it pressing against me.
I step backwards and find the toilet seat behind me. I sit on the edge. I look up at him he knows what I want and hope he’s going to let me do ..............
With a knowing look I carry on letting my eyes fall to the matter in hand..... I take down his zipper and undo his button and oh my did I get a shock. Not only was he hard but he wasn’t wearing any underwear. He had gone commando mmmmmmmmmm.
After I get over my shock I let my hand stroke him. As I move forward to place it just to the edge of my mouth my tongue flicks out and I can taste the small drops of precum that emerged on his tip.
I let it slowly enter my mouth bit by bit.
I look up at him. His eyes are wide almost as if he didn’t expect me to do that mmmmmmmm. His swollen cock deep in my mouth as I wet it with my mouth my tongue running all around.
He thrusts forward pushing even deeper mmmmmmm.
His hands are in my hair as he thrusts deeper.
This is good as it’s been a while since I've had a cock so deep in my mouth.
I have my hands on his ass cheeks pulling him closer to me
I want him so deep ..........................
I WROTEYou see me looking at your body and I guess my eyes (as well as my erection) must have revealed how much I want you. When you sit on the edge of the toilet seat I think I know what you have in mind!
You undo the button and zip of my trousers... You gasp and look very surprised. Surely my cock is not that wonderful…. Then I realise that you were expecting to see my pants!
You move your face towards my cock and I leak a few drops of precum in anticipation. You lick the precum and then you take me into your mouth very slowly. It feels so good! I am watching your face to see if you are enjoying it, and I am watching my cock as it gently slides between your lips.
I thrust forward pushing further into your mouth and you groan with pleasure. I can feel your tongue playing over me, and sometimes you let your teeth scrape along my length – That is amazing!!!!
My hands are in your hair, and then I hold your shoulders, which makes you groan again. My hands move over your back and I quickly release the catch at the back of your bra. You swiftly remove the straps from your shoulders and let it fall to the floor. Your lovely breasts tumble free and I can see that your nipples are very hard. I cup your breasts in my hand and use my thumb and forefinger to tease and pull your pink nipples.
I pull my cock out of your mouth and I guide it to one of your breasts. I press the length against your smooth skin so that the wet tip touches your nipple. I move the tip over and around your nipple, spreading my precum and making it glisten.
I ask you to lift your legs so that I can pull off your knickers…………
SHE WROTEHis cock is plunging in and out of my mouth scrapping against my teeth going so deep that its hitting against the back of my throat almost making me gag.
I am enjoying this don’t want it to stop he has leaned over me to unhook my bra
My breasts falling from my bra. Nipples hard as he takes them between his finger and thumb squeezing pulling them even more making them tingle.
He takes his cock from my mouth I make a protest as I want it back …..
Ssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhh he says as he takes the tip and places it against my swollen nipple spreading his precum on it mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
He then leans forward and takes it in his mouth sucking on my nipple
mmmmmmmmmmm I groan.
when he’s finished doing that he asks me to lift my legs so he can remove my knickers
I open my legs wide so he can see how wet they are.
Taking my finger I run it up and down my panties pushing them into my slit making them even wetter.
Then placing my fingers at his mouth I let him smell my sweet smell. He opens his mouth as I place them in for him to suck.
I slide my panties down over my knees then ankles stepping out of them as I do so I see him looking his eyes in growing wide when he notices that I am smooth shaven.
“Oh my “ he says.
His fingers trail from the breast he had been cupping down to between my legs, caressing my inner thighs.
His fingers searching and finding what they’ve been looking for mmmmmmmmmmm.
I WROTEWhen I ask you to lift your legs so that I can remove your knickers, you open your legs really wide and it is obvious that your kickers are very wet. You run your fingers along your slit and the outline of your lips shows quite clearly. Then you offer your wet fingers up to my face. I can smell your juice and I eagerly suck your fingers. You taste so good and I want to taste even more!
As you slide down your panties, I am so pleased to see that you are shaven. Your pussy looks so soft and smooth. Your lips have parted slightly and they are shining with your wetness. I let my fingers run down your body from your breast, over your stomach, and over your mound. I run my fingers around your groin, very near your lips but not yet touching them. You open your legs even wider and thrust your pussy towards me, as I continue to tease you.
I rest two fingers along your lips, and gently move my fingers apart, opening your lips. You groan with delight, and I continue to open you so that I can see everything mmmmmmm.
I slip one finger inside you. You are soooooo wet. I can feel it, and I can hear your juices “clicking” as I explore deeper inside you with my finger.
At this point I kneel in front of you.
I put my head between your thighs.
I start to blow cool air along your inner thighs, gradually moving closer and closer to your wet pussy.
Eventually my mouth hovers above your wet lips.
I plant a long soft kiss between your open lips, and I start to lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Your juice mixes with my saliva, and it doesn’t take long until your lips are soaking.
Sometimes I slip my tongue into your hole.
Sometimes I slide my finger in and out of you.
Sometimes I keep licking.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
Lick.
I can see that your clit is waiting for my attention.
But it will have to wait a little longer.
I have an idea.
I wonder if you will like it.
I open my mouth and I cover as much of your pussy as I can.
I start to suck.
I suck harder.
And harder.
I suck until I feel your flesh pass between my lips into my mouth.
My tongue moves around and over your flesh inside my mouth, while I continue to suck you.
I am wondering if you like what I am doing to you…………
SHE WROTEHe kneels down in the cramped space and places himself in between my legs.
I can feel him blowing softly on my inner thighs and he is moving upwards to my wetness.
Thrusting my hips towards him I can feel his lips on me… a little kiss then another then I can feel his tongue dart in between my lips mmmmmmmmmmmmmm so hot.
He is licking me. It feels tremendous…. every now and then he licks up any drops he has missed.
He is licking me not missing an inch… my juices are flowing.... he has me soaked. I can feel it trickling.
He goes from licking me to inserting his finger deep in my wet pussy releasing my juices for him to taste and then back again.
By now I am overwhelmed by the experience and lie back groaning with enjoyment.
He has my inner lips wide I know he can see how swollen my clit it how it screams to be sucked.
But he doesn’t ………..
Instead I feel his mouth clamping around my pussy drawing it deep in his mouth.
Sucking me all in.
I can feel his tongue searching me.
The experience is amazing I feel as though im being sucked into him.
My clit is about to explode.
As the pressure builds up.
Wanting the release so much I grab his head and almost ram it deep in my aching pussy.
At this point I explode with the most massive orgasm I have ever had which I’m sure half the train must have heard.
I have cum so much…. this I know because I can hear him.
Its almost as if he’s drinking it from me my body shudders as my climax comes to an end.
Oh ………………………….. amazing!!
I WROTEI am wondering if you like what I am doing to you…… I soon discover the answer when you moan loudly and grab my head, gripping it firmly against your soaking pussy!
I release your flesh from my mouth, and I see your clit standing proud. I sense you are close to climax so I lick your clit full on. You moan loudly again and your body starts to shudder. I continue licking, as I want you to cum. My mouth is soaking with the mixture of your juice and my saliva, but it seems that you are producing more and more juice mmmmmmmm.
Now I am sucking your clit and my teeth touch against it. I feel your body go rigid as your hands reach out for something to hold on to. I gently nibble your clit and in a split second you seem to explode. You shout so loudly that other people must have heard you! Your whole body shakes with pleasure and even more juice appears from your pussy. I suck and lick on your juices as I don’t want to lose even a single drop. You taste fantastic!
I allow you to calm a little after your orgasm, but I know we both want more.
Taking firm hold of your ass, I pull you forward so that your open and dripping pussy is in line with my cock. We look at each other knowing what will happen next. You smile and say “Fuck me now!”
I don’t need telling twice. Even though your lips are wide open, I use my fingers to open you even wider, and without further hesitation I plunge my rampant cock inside you. You are so wet that I slip deep inside you with ease.
You gasp!
SHE WROTEAfter experiencing the most wonderful orgasm I have ever had I lie back satisfied. I look at him and I know he has enjoyed and we both want more.
He has moved my ass forward and my pussy which is dripping wet is in line with his cock which is leaking precum ……..mmmmmmmmmmm
I look at him I can wait no longer I want it and I want it now…………..
I tell him to fuck me …….
It seems that was all he was waiting for as he plunges his cock deep in my open pussy.
To feel him slide in all the way is beyond description.
He thrusts deeper if that is possible.
I can hear my juices squelching as he thrust faster and faster.
I slide a hand forward to my exposed clit, rubbing it.
He looks at me knowing I am near another climax.
The pressure is building it needs a release.
He moves forward to take a nipple in his mouth sucking on it.
I can’t hold on any longer my fingers dig into his back my head thrown back.
I let go.
The moment is so intense as my body shudders and shakes ……………….